By Caleb
I am inside looking out. I see the heavy rain splashing onto the door. The brown trees are creaking and swinging on the road. It is scary in the strong wind. The little leaves are brown and green and falling into a circle. A black cat is wet and soggy. The soggy cat ran under the house. I hear branches breaking and smashing. The loud banging wind is whistling and talking. Hard rain falling and thundering, dropping on the roof and making puddles. The black waves are crashing and falling on the shore. Footprints jumping and running in the puddles.
I feel warm with a fire and food.
Great story Caleb. Hope you are keeping warm on those cold, horrible days.
ReplyDeleteNeat story Caleb. I like how you used lots of interesting words in your story.
ReplyDeleteHi Caleb
ReplyDeleteI LOVE the way you have used words to build a picture in my mind of a stormy winter's day. Great writing Caleb. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
From Mrs Savage
WOW My son!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteYou have such an amazing way with words:) I am soooooo proud of you:) Keep up with the fantastic work my son:)
Also thank you to Caleb's Teachers Mrs Proffit and Mrs Dodds for recognising,encouraging and extending his writing abilites:)
Keep up the great work and can't wait to read more:) MWAHH XXXXXXX
Love Mum